I think that “it’s reach” in the first narrative block should be “its reach”.
In the second there’s a comma placed before “crying” that should be placed after it.
Thanks, the comma after if is for the dramatic pause but it is missing the comma after crying. Uploading the fixes now! thanks again!
You know, I’m kinda getting the feeling that, it’s been so long since Earth actually talked to somebody, that he’s actually forgotten how. And this is the best substitute he could come up with when he finally noticed Hue.
That makes a lot of sense. And it could be once Earth figures out how to talk to people again, he’ll be the most talkative.
Tis many tears shed since the Legend of the Hidden Temple was cancelled and the face still can’t find a new acting job. Apologies, I couldn’t resist to make that reference.
“And so, when I asked the stone face why he cried so, he simply replied,
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I think that “it’s reach” in the first narrative block should be “its reach”.
In the second there’s a comma placed before “crying” that should be placed after it.
Thanks, the comma after if is for the dramatic pause but it is missing the comma after crying. Uploading the fixes now! thanks again!
You know, I’m kinda getting the feeling that, it’s been so long since Earth actually talked to somebody, that he’s actually forgotten how. And this is the best substitute he could come up with when he finally noticed Hue.
That makes a lot of sense. And it could be once Earth figures out how to talk to people again, he’ll be the most talkative.
Tis many tears shed since the Legend of the Hidden Temple was cancelled and the face still can’t find a new acting job. Apologies, I couldn’t resist to make that reference.
“And so, when I asked the stone face why he cried so, he simply replied,
‘Fist of the Blue Sky.'”